英文诗写得流畅压韵.
Dirt flows in the shadow
Time dusted my window
是否可用 Time has dusted my w ...
云天 发表于 2010-3-24 08:00 PM 
right, it would sound better. thanks. I've made the modification.
time dusted my window, time has dusted my window, well...yeah, I think "has dusted" is more appropriate.
time dusted , time has dusted...hmm...my mind is whacked back and forth to figure out if my window pane can be seen through or not...
thanks, 云天。:) |