游子吟 中诗英译

云天

为了多挣十分给心妹. 开条线.

游子吟
孟郊

慈母手中线， 游子身上衣。
临行密密缝， 意恐迟迟归。
谁言寸草心， 报得三春晖。

The Song of A Wandering Son
Meng Jiao
Translated by Yuntian

Threads in the hands of a fond mother
Clothes on her wandering son.
Upon his departure, she sews it with fine stitches
For fear that his return will be postponed.
Who says the heart of inch-long grass
Can repay the spring sunshine.


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云天

语婷

没想到还能试出来。。。
这个比那个“肥鱼”的。。。容易些～～


<<Singing for a departing son>>（语婷版）

Threads in a mother hand
Clothes on a departing son
Sewing in the finest stitches
Worrying his long journeys
Who said the inch-long grass
Will indeed make spring spread.

我想，就是让米国人看懂，也不必每句都有谓语的。。。诗歌就是诗歌嘛～～一串名词，也可达意。在哪个国家的诗歌里，不都是这样的？所以觉得以前云天翻译的那些，挺好的。。。

反正我喜欢～～：-）

不玩了。。。收收心～
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不行。。还得按顺向思维翻译。。。不然又误导了～～

<<Singing for a departing son>>（语婷版）

Threads in a mother hand
Clothes on a departing son
Sewing in the finest stitches
Worrying his long journeys
Who said the heart of an inch-long grass
Can ever repay the spring-warmth like a mother's love

云天

没想到还能试出来。。。
这个比那个“肥鱼”的。。。容易些～～


（语婷版）

Threads in a mother hand
Clothes on a departing son
Sewing in the finest stitches
Worrying his long journeys
Who said the  ...
语婷 发表于 2009-4-25 04:17 AM

婷子太阳雅兴, 样样灵光!     

我是瞎译了.  跟着原诗的格式走, 逸士先生好象说过这样的意思.

谢谢捧场.  周末快乐!  

八十一子

云天版和语婷版都很妙。
小小建议：

<<Singing for a departing son>>

Threads in a mother hand
Clothes on a departing son
Sewing in the finest stitches
Fearing his belated return
Who says a son's heart, like an inch-tall grass,
Can ever repay the spring-warmth of a mother?

心娴

才看到云烟为了多挣十分给我开的＂游子吟＂线。谢谢。:)

想起成方圆的《虾球传》主题歌＂游子吟＂，好久没听到过了。云烟还记得吗？

http://qxy823.blog.hexun.com/13254482_d.html

云天

才看到云烟为了多挣十分给我开的＂游子吟＂线。谢谢。:)

想起成方圆的《虾球传》主题歌＂游子吟＂，好久没听到过了。云烟还记得吗？

http://qxy823.blog.hexun.com/13254482_d.html ...
心娴 发表于 2009-4-26 11:31 PM

心妹, 不谢. 为了凑给150 分.  :)

记得, 谢谢.  还在LOAD.  :)

云天

云天版和语婷版都很妙。
小小建议：



Threads in a mother hand
Clothes on a departing son
Sewing in the finest stitches
Fearing his belated return
Who says a son's heart, like an inch-tall grass,
Can e ...
八十一子 发表于 2009-4-26 10:48 AM

八十一子先生译功高超, 惊艳得很!  

谢谢!

八十一子

云天莫客气。
Btw, "mother hand" should be "mother's hands".

云天

云天莫客气。
Btw, "mother hand" should be "mother's hands".
八十一子 发表于 2009-4-28 07:45 AM

没有了.  先生好身手!  :)

Yeah, I noticed it. I knew it was a typo. :)

Have a fabulous day!