望天门山----李白

海外逸士

望天门山 Watching Heavenly Gate Mountain
李白

天门中断楚江开，碧水东流至此回。两岸青山相对出，孤帆一片日边来。

Heavenly Gate split open in the middle for Chu River;
The blue water flowing east will flow back from here.
The verdant mountains on either bank rise opposite;(rise opposite on eigher bank)
A lonely sail comes from the side of the sun.

云天

逸士先生美译！
"split open" 好传神。 split----被劈开, past participle？  
回： turn back 可以吗？
孤帆：可否说 a lone sail？

云天

Prof. Yishi, have a nice weekend! :)

海外逸士

turn back 可以吗？   sure.

孤帆：可否说 a lone sail？ of course.

thanks for your reading.

云天

Prof. Yishi, thanks a lot!

Have a terrific week ahead!