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湘西山民:【望文生义】水调歌头·莎士比亚的云雀(Sonnet 29) ...

2026-8-22 01:36 AM| 发布者: 昨夜雨| 查看: 6| 评论: 0|原作者: 湘西山民|来自: 小站空间

摘要: 【水调歌头】莎士比亚十四行诗 (29)湘西山民 译, AI 绘图命运冷眉眼,独自泣穷途。仰天长啸难应,空自恨何如。自顾平生多误,更羡旁人际遇,才貌友人殊。千好竟生厌,百念皆成虚。甫念君,旋忘我,意何舒。忽如破晓 ...

【水调歌头】莎士比亚十四行诗 (29)

湘西山民 译, AI 绘图

命运冷眉眼,独自泣穷途。
仰天长啸难应,空自恨何如。
自顾平生多误,更羡旁人际遇,才貌友人殊。
千好竟生厌,百念皆成虚。


甫念君,旋忘我,意何舒。
忽如破晓云雀,舒翼出东隅。
一唱天门开处,万仞尘寰低俯,君意胜明珠。
但愿人长久,不换帝王居。


词谱依龙榆生编《唐宋词格律》水调歌头定格(例词苏东坡《明月几时有》)。词林正韵第四部九鱼十虞十一模,六言句押仄声暗韵。

唐朝大曲有《水调歌》,据《隋唐嘉话》,为隋炀帝凿汴河时所作。宋乐入“中吕调”,见《碧鸡漫志》卷四。凡大曲有“歌头”,此殆裁截其首段为之。九十五字,前后片各四平韵。亦有前后片两六言句夹叶仄韵者,有平仄互叶几于句句用韵者。

翻译原则:去洋腔,不解释,存诗意。
 
Sonnet 29: When, in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes
When, in disgrace with fortune and men’s eyes,
I all alone beweep my outcast state,
And trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries,
And look upon myself and curse my fate,
Wishing me like to one more rich in hope,
Featured like him, like him with friends possessed,
Desiring this man’s art and that man’s scope,
With what I most enjoy contented least;
Yet in these thoughts myself almost despising,
Haply I think on thee, and then my state,
(Like to the lark at break of day arising
From sullen earth) sings hymns at heaven’s gate;
       For thy sweet love remembered such wealth brings
       That then I scorn to change my state with kings.

 

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